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SHORT SYNONYMS Use short, vigorous words. Headline writers usually have a vocabulary all their own. They learn to think in terms of short synonyms for longer expressions when writing headlines. Many copy-editing texts contain lists of short synonyms for headline use. Note the following examples: l Named for appointed or elected l Set for arrange or schedule Win for victory Ex for former Job for appointment or position OK for accept, approve or adopt Try for attempt Vet for veteran Hike for raise or increase Tell for reveal or inform In addition to these synonyms, many more are commonly used in Navy newspapers. Some of these are as follows: Sub for submarine Flyer or pilot for aviator Jet for jet-propelled aircraft All hands for entire ship's company Ships for reenlists Crew for crew members Plane for aircraft or airplane XO for executive officer CO or skipper for commanding officer or captain SPLITS Do not split words, phrases, proper nouns or compound nouns between lines. Note the following examples: Words: 5,000 PO1 advancements predicted off September examinations Phrases: Crew members of USS Basil Fome visit Funafuti Proper Names: Capt. Robert J. Matron assumes command of HC-16 Compound Nouns: Saufley chief petty officers sponsor orphans' picnic LINE BALANCE Try to balance headlines typographically. Consider the following examples: Unbalanced: Navy, Coast Guard icebreakers save U.K. ship Balanced: Navy, Coast Guard icebreakers rescue grounded U.K. corvette ABBREVIATIONS You should use commonly known and accepted abbreviations when they are appropriate. Do not be afraid to use Navy abbreviations for ships, aircraft, ratings, ranks, commands, titles, and so forth, in ship and station publications. The following are some commonly used Navy abbreviations: CPO for chief petty officer PO1, P02 and P03 for petty officer grades ComRats for commuted rations NCO for noncommissioned officer LDO for limited duty officer GQ for general quarters SecNav for Secretary of the Navy CNO for Chief of Naval Operations Use these and other Navy abbreviations only in ship or station publications. Never use them in press releases to civilian news media. For further information, consult the latest edition of The Associated Press Stylebook and Libel Manual. |
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